OK, it's settled. I'm having both Mally and Thackery come over to my house for Christmas dinner. LOL
I love how Mally, being perfectly Mally, is the one who goes and finds Alice standing in the doorway. Even a mouse with her muchness can only handle so much lovesick!Tarrant, ROFL.
Tarrant's insecurities showing themselves here are perfect. There's something endearing to me about seeing him Wanting Alice without Knowing that she Wants him back...(I guess I'm a sucker for emotional whump! LOL) Though, dude, come on, Alice is in your doorway, that should be telling you something, LOL.
You did an absolutely fabulous job of describing Alice's desires without Saying Too Much. (Which is really a gift.)
I can not wait until Part 3 comes out! (But, boo hoo, I'll be at the in laws all day so it might have to wait until the 26th...OR, since you're a day ahead, you could post it early on Christmas and it would be like a Christmas Eve present! Yeah! That's it!!!!)
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Date: 2010-12-20 09:40 pm (UTC)I love how Mally, being perfectly Mally, is the one who goes and finds Alice standing in the doorway. Even a mouse with her muchness can only handle so much lovesick!Tarrant, ROFL.
Tarrant's insecurities showing themselves here are perfect. There's something endearing to me about seeing him Wanting Alice without Knowing that she Wants him back...(I guess I'm a sucker for emotional whump! LOL) Though, dude, come on, Alice is in your doorway, that should be telling you something, LOL.
You did an absolutely fabulous job of describing Alice's desires without Saying Too Much. (Which is really a gift.)
I can not wait until Part 3 comes out! (But, boo hoo, I'll be at the in laws all day so it might have to wait until the 26th...OR, since you're a day ahead, you could post it early on Christmas and it would be like a Christmas Eve present! Yeah! That's it!!!!)