Oh wow, just wow... I usually get bored with stories after the main characters are already together (I love angst!), but your story and characters are so deep I just find myself getting sucked into 'what's going to happen next?!?'. I don't trust Avenleif at all - I can just hear the wheels turning after he saw Alice's blood-bond. And I get the feeling Alice doesn't know how powerful the bond really is herself. That's just awesome how she's feeling Tarrant's emotions. I also like how you've written Alice as having a hard time not thinking about him, a lot of stories focus on Tarrant and how much he misses Alice and leave out her point of view. And Mirana sending the pic to him, lol - so devious! What's with only 2 chaps??? I NEED MORE -- NOW!
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Date: 2010-06-16 09:01 pm (UTC)