Oh, I know what you mean about the castle. I don't want to know, and I almost added that it s/b up to the reader's imagination. That's best.
As for great ideas, heh! YOU have them, but I don't have many! :) I wish I did. But you and stories like this are great inspiration.
Yeah, I guess I forgot basic biology, too. As Krystoval is an "it" even tho I think of it as a "he" for some reason. And the eggs make perfect sense. But I'm still glad Chess is there! We get to see a tender side of Chess that even HE doesn't want to admit to. :) Well done!
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Date: 2010-07-15 11:56 pm (UTC)As for great ideas, heh! YOU have them, but I don't have many! :) I wish I did. But you and stories like this are great inspiration.
Yeah, I guess I forgot basic biology, too. As Krystoval is an "it" even tho I think of it as a "he" for some reason. And the eggs make perfect sense. But I'm still glad Chess is there! We get to see a tender side of Chess that even HE doesn't want to admit to. :) Well done!